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Little Miss Mary

 

  Nobody seemed to care about Mary. She was born in India, where her father was a British official. He was busy with his work, and her mother, who was very beautiful, spent all her time going to parties. So an Indian woman, Kamala, was paid to take care of the little girl. Mary was not a pretty child. She had a thin angry face and thin yellow hair. She was always giving orders to Kamala, who had to obey. Mary never thought of other people, but only of herself. In fact, she was a very selfish, disagreeable, bad-tempered little girl.

  one very hot morning, when she was about nine years old, she woke up and saw that instead of Kamala there was a different Indian servant by her bed.

 

3단계 첫 문장입니다. 까다로운 부분은 없지만, 관계대명사나 관계부사가 등장하며 문장이 길어지고 있습니다. 긴 문장을 길게 처리해도 되고, 짧은 문장으로 나누어도 좋습니다. 중요한 점은 호흡입니다. 호흡이 너무 길어도 너무 짧아도 곤란합니다. 그래서 다 쓰고나면 직접 읽으면서 호흡을 느껴보시길 바랍니다.